Bubbles

Slowly the pressure builds

Layers thinning rapidly

So that solid rims

Are now transparent

From inside your flimsy cocoon

You see others

In theirs

Floating with the insecurities

Given to us by corporate fraud

And blind alley governments

Pressure expanding

So that all between you

And the street

Is the sharp percentage point

On which your bubble

Falls

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30 thoughts on “Bubbles

  1. love the title,
    beautiful and apt words….

    feel free to share 1 to 3 random poems with us, our poetry potluck week 29 is to open on Sunday, at 8pm, American central..we remain open for 72 hours..

    hope to see you in.
    bless you.
    keep up the excellence.
    love
    xxx

  2. Bubbles…thank you for this poem…you said so many realities that need to be expressed and made aware of…to do it with your poetry makes every word more poignant and profound…i admire your courage as well to realize our bubbles have burst “so that all between you And the street is a sharp percentage point”…bravo…wonderful words and expressed so very well… a poem which speaks volumes…

    • Thank you to all for your comments. I appreciate you visiting and relating to my poem. I shall drop by a read yours tomorrow Thingy…I do hope things get better. Best wishes to all…

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