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Pair of Pale Headed Rosellas in my backyard. (Sorry about the quality of the pic)

 

 

Continuous rain

falls upon the love birds

waiting out bad weather

together

 

For dverse poetics

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25 thoughts on “

  1. Aww this is really sweet πŸ™‚

    I had one thought – what if the final line had a five syllable count like the first one?

    The thought just popped into my head – I enjoyed this though- I can be a sap but the picture is really so sweet πŸ™‚

  2. The exact opposite mood to my piece today, Di – and a wonderful corrective πŸ™‚ Birds around here are almost universally brown, grey and white, or black – except for the robins who bring a welcome splash of colour.

  3. I know all about continuous rain! My sympathies to the love birds. I like your pic and verse.

  4. I love that you put in your own pics — and this is fun.
    You say so much in this short poem — you address the silly notion that real love is merely a feeling. Tis also an act of being together.

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